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Mars
mellows over misty marsh fires
Snow
flakes having creamy ice desires
Water
flowers up until the grapes sour
Fireflies
glow like a-waaay the hour
Butterflies
touch and go as time expires
Rainbows
connect to form a kiss in space wires
Creation
bursts forth on radiant light beams
Creatures
come to grow alike, or so it seems
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Or so it seems.
Majority of One bursting open at the seems 😉
Your poetry makes me happy, Uncle Tree. Very, very happy.
As if, as if, as if, Maj One, as if we were altogether in this.
Yes, Ed. The seams on my jeans have busted out a flowery array.
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Hey Bryan! I’m very, Very much happier knowing you feel that way. Thanks!
I love the poem structure, it gives it a great rhythm when you read it. And it also makes it special.
Have you tried reading only the single word line. It is also interesting.
This is my favorite part
“Butterflies
touch and go as time expires”. It makes a lot of sense to me.
Hugh uncle
Thank you, Mariana!
The reason I structured it thus, is because I was using ‘flakes’
as an action word. I wish I could write in the rhythm that’s
playing in my head as I read it. Some words need to be held. me2
Butterflies are finicky eaters, from what I’ve seen. Hugz, me niece!