Consequently Alike

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Mars

mellows over misty marsh fires

Snow

flakes having creamy ice desires

Water

flowers up until the grapes sour

Fireflies

glow like a-waaay the hour

Butterflies

touch and go as time expires

Rainbows

connect to form a kiss in space wires

Creation

bursts forth on radiant light beams

Creatures

come to grow alike, or so it seems

.

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6 thoughts on “Consequently Alike

  1. As if, as if, as if, Maj One, as if we were altogether in this.

    Yes, Ed. The seams on my jeans have busted out a flowery array.
    .

    Hey Bryan! I’m very, Very much happier knowing you feel that way. Thanks!

  2. I love the poem structure, it gives it a great rhythm when you read it. And it also makes it special.
    Have you tried reading only the single word line. It is also interesting.
    This is my favorite part
    “Butterflies
    touch and go as time expires”. It makes a lot of sense to me.
    Hugh uncle

  3. Thank you, Mariana!

    The reason I structured it thus, is because I was using ‘flakes’
    as an action word. I wish I could write in the rhythm that’s
    playing in my head as I read it. Some words need to be held. me2

    Butterflies are finicky eaters, from what I’ve seen. Hugz, me niece!

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